01-15-2013, 11:05 AM
Hi,
Thank you all for your comments.
I did intend to write something that may seem humorous but that was actually serious. I'm glad that this came through...
I have added punctuation. I hope this is better.
"You can't love a covered woman," he declared.
"Because you can't see much through her," he blared.
Then he called her a black sloth and told her to go back to her clan.
When he got up to leave he said, 'You see, I'm a leg man! '
I thought that was funny.
But soon, I found myself crying.
For the thing called 'the heart' is now long gone with time.
Since he only seemed to care for that body part of mine .
Thank you all for your comments.
I did intend to write something that may seem humorous but that was actually serious. I'm glad that this came through...I have added punctuation. I hope this is better.
"You can't love a covered woman," he declared.
"Because you can't see much through her," he blared.
Then he called her a black sloth and told her to go back to her clan.
When he got up to leave he said, 'You see, I'm a leg man! '
I thought that was funny.
But soon, I found myself crying.
For the thing called 'the heart' is now long gone with time.
Since he only seemed to care for that body part of mine .