Meeting Katherine part 1

Meeting Katherine part 1

rowens
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01-14-2013, 11:10 PM

It makes sense. I know what's happening. But it's choppy, and leaves no lasting effect. As fading memories, or a sketchy flashback, it might work. But I think you remember these things a lot more vividly and with more feeling than you've shown in this poem.

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Meeting Katherine part 1 - by Sonata - 01-14-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 11:10 PM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by Sonata - 01-15-2013, 05:38 AM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by rowens - 01-15-2013, 06:45 AM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by Leanne - 01-15-2013, 06:50 AM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by Sonata - 01-15-2013, 08:45 PM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by shemthepenman - 01-18-2013, 06:45 AM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by Todd - 01-18-2013, 07:20 AM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by monablackbird - 01-19-2013, 07:20 AM

RE: Meeting Katherine part 1 - by Sonata - 01-19-2013, 10:32 PM

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