High-Water Mark (1st Revision)
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i'm fine with caps after a period.
but a period and a comma leave a different length of pause.
i just feel i should have paused longer when i see a cap after a comma.
ee cummings like lower casde i's didn't he, i like the big I in a poem.

like i said, i realize it's a choice thing and not written in stone.
is every line a sentence? perhaps something for discussion on another board Big Grin

sorry for being off topic svanhoevan
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High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-13-2013, 12:38 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-13-2013, 12:43 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Todd - 01-13-2013, 02:13 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by svanhoeven - 01-14-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Todd - 01-14-2013, 05:08 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 02:50 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by svanhoeven - 01-14-2013, 03:20 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 03:59 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 10:28 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 04:26 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-15-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 08:10 AM



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