High-Water Mark (1st Revision)
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Billy, it's funny but I feel different. I get hung up when a line is begun without a capitol. A new line is a new sentence.

It's kinda like a personal thing for me too, where I literally cannot comprehend sentences with improper grammar. I end up correcting them, even if I don't post it, so that I can appreciate writing.

Err... I also don't like lone, lowercase "i" letters. The shape is a bit distracting.


It's a serious problem to have on the internet, I know. I've been trying to get used to it.
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High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-13-2013, 12:38 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-13-2013, 12:43 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Todd - 01-13-2013, 02:13 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by svanhoeven - 01-14-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Todd - 01-14-2013, 05:08 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 02:50 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by svanhoeven - 01-14-2013, 03:20 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 03:59 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 10:28 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 04:26 PM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-15-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 08:10 AM



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