Pockets of Gold

[Keith]

Hi Kieth,
Your words really drew me in and then in a multitude of ways took me to the heart of the matter in an exquisite way.
There are so many great lines and turns in this piece (arbil has mentioned a few), but to be able to extend the original inspiration in the way that you have is real art and with such a lightness of touch.
My fav:- too many tiny details fill my eyes, viewed like shards of glass from a broken vase, which I'm trying to reassemble.

Thanks for sharing - beautiful.
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Thanks Cidermaid, have been trying my hand at prose and short stories latety but CSE grade 2 english, spelling and grammer doesn't really cut the mustard still at least I'm still learning
Keith