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Untitled 1st poem
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01-14-2013, 09:39 AM
That last stanza was amazing i think your best. I enjoyed the imagery i could feel the talons. A few tips the over use of dots in "Scarcely felt......," isn't needed only one for the pause.
Isn't It Evil to Live Backwards~Loaded Lux I'm Batman, act up and I'll squeeze Hecklers/You'll die before the first clip drops, Heath Ledger!
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Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 09:07 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Arriedo - 01-14-2013, 09:39 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 09:55 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 10:37 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 11:05 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 11:39 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 11:55 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 12:03 PM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 12:53 PM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by billy - 01-14-2013, 04:12 PM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 07:04 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-15-2013, 09:59 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by billy - 01-15-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-17-2013, 02:38 PM
RE: Untitled 1st poem - by earlymorningnoises - 01-15-2013, 01:00 PM
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