wrote last night "Monster"
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I keep falling into a trap with my critiques on this one.

I think you can keep your "I" uppercase even if it is the first letter of a line and in the middle of a sentence. Because people are used to seeing it as uppercase, so that won't mess up the flow.
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wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 03:48 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 04:07 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by Stalker - 01-14-2013, 04:18 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:20 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 06:42 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM



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