wrote last night "Monster"

wrote last night "Monster"

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01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

I used to suffer from bad self-esteem so I feel like this speaks personally to me. I liked the way you personified this 'monster' and your choice of vernacular. Overall it was interesting and entertaining. I particularly like the fourth paragraph (or is it a stanza? I never took English or poetry past 9th grade as I dropped out of high school)

Here's my bio!
http://pigpenpoetry.com/Thread-Ayyy?pid=...#pid111236

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wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 03:48 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 04:07 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by Stalker - 01-14-2013, 04:18 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:20 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

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