01-14-2013, 07:12 AM
(01-14-2013, 04:39 AM)rowens Wrote: I let anybody know if I make a poem about them. They might not like it; and they might not even like poetry. But I've never been one to hide my feelings from a woman, or poems or songs or anything like that. I find it much harder to be quiet about it. If I want a woman, I want her. If she doesn't want me, I just have to live with it.It's more that I can barely find words when I'm around her. I'd love to tell her how I feel, though.
This is for fun, not to edit. But did you mean it when you said: "that's be grand"?
Well, she might know. Well, my friend who knows has some trouble keeping quiet. He keeps trying to help, and he's gotten a few of his other friends to sorta help. Apparently, he didn't realize that could make it obvious to her. Since then, though, she seems to be a bit more at ease around me. Apparently, she's also really shy.
But yeah, that was a typo. It's supposed to be "That'd" as in "that would." I'm fixing it now.
Oh, and I'm open to criticism. If there is an issue, I need to know about it. If there's any bones you have to pick, you are obligated to let me know.
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind