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wrote last night "Monster"
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01-14-2013, 04:20 AM
When a sentence goes over into another line, maybe you could leave that line beginning with lowercase. So that people will know where to pause, and so they will be able to follow your narrative more smoothly. There is at least one comma in there already. You could simply add more punctuation. Up to you.
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wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 03:48 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 04:07 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by Stalker - 01-14-2013, 04:18 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:20 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 06:42 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM
RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM
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