wrote last night "Monster"

wrote last night "Monster"

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01-14-2013, 04:18 AM

phew - when I looked at this I saw alot of words - then I started to read it - no punctuation.

made my eyes tired.

I think there are some neat bits - how about breaking it up into stanzas to give the poor old reader a break?

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wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 03:48 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 04:07 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by Stalker - 01-14-2013, 04:18 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:20 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

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