High-Water Mark (1st Revision)

High-Water Mark (1st Revision)

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01-14-2013, 03:59 AM

I think it's more the rhythm of the lines than the breaks. The breaks are part of the beat, but the words and syllables are really what make poetry (in my opinion, at least).

Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind

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High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-13-2013, 12:38 PM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-13-2013, 12:43 PM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Todd - 01-13-2013, 02:13 PM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by svanhoeven - 01-14-2013, 12:10 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Todd - 01-14-2013, 05:08 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 02:50 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by svanhoeven - 01-14-2013, 03:20 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 03:59 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (first poem) - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 05:07 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Card - 01-14-2013, 10:19 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 10:28 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-14-2013, 04:26 PM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-15-2013, 12:32 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 01:15 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by billy - 01-15-2013, 07:36 AM

RE: High-Water Mark (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 08:10 AM

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