wrote last night "Monster"

wrote last night "Monster"

rowens
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01-14-2013, 03:54 AM

Maybe you could have all the beginnings of sentences start with uppercase letters, like you did a few times, since you have no punctuation. The 'i' is sometimes 'I'. No real pattern.

The "your not good enough" should be "you're".

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wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 03:48 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 04:07 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by Stalker - 01-14-2013, 04:18 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 04:20 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by jferrell - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: wrote last night "Monster" - by rowens - 01-14-2013, 07:45 AM

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