01-14-2013, 01:57 AM
It's one of those poems that does what it seems set out to do. And I like it all right.
I can see where it's coming from. And its fragmented style remains coherent.
It works when you stay on the same plane with it, and move in and out of its own dimensions.
The dash/hyphens sort of work with this style of poem. The feeling of connections and disconnections.
Somebody with the power can fix your title if they come by. Or you can ask them, I guess.
I can see where it's coming from. And its fragmented style remains coherent.
It works when you stay on the same plane with it, and move in and out of its own dimensions.
The dash/hyphens sort of work with this style of poem. The feeling of connections and disconnections.
Somebody with the power can fix your title if they come by. Or you can ask them, I guess.