first one I've written in a while "Try"
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nice work i especially like the first part about the polar opposites and then the middle ground between them. It goes on to really capture the emotion of a torn soul, and I could feel your pain throughout.
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RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by doolasmind - 01-13-2013, 08:01 PM



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