01-13-2013, 08:01 PM
nice work i especially like the first part about the polar opposites and then the middle ground between them. It goes on to really capture the emotion of a torn soul, and I could feel your pain throughout.
|
first one I've written in a while "Try"
|
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
first one I've written in a while "Try" - by destiny1313 - 01-13-2013, 01:25 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 02:53 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by destiny1313 - 01-13-2013, 03:30 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by arbil_poieo - 01-13-2013, 03:37 PM
RE: first one I've written in a while "Try" - by doolasmind - 01-13-2013, 08:01 PM
|