01-13-2013, 12:19 PM
I don't really think that's strong, Jae.
Well, I disagree with you, but I don't think it's too strong criticism.
There's a term I like to use. "Repetition of Repetitious Thought." The repeated line is useful because it shows us that there are some elements of disbelief and denial over the "friend" not being true. It gets us into the head of the narrator.
Well, I disagree with you, but I don't think it's too strong criticism.
There's a term I like to use. "Repetition of Repetitious Thought." The repeated line is useful because it shows us that there are some elements of disbelief and denial over the "friend" not being true. It gets us into the head of the narrator.
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind