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world play as well.

I see what you did there!

And while a bit of cliche can help, to show how predictable life can be, Billy is right that too many makes it generic.

And I do see just a few spelling and grammar errors. I could edit them, if you want (however, though I rarely advocate the use of "cuz" it works much better than the recognized word here so you should keep that in).