01-13-2013, 09:34 AM
I think that's a much better line to end on. More wistful. It's tighter -- though "despite of" is a bit odd, I'd say either just "despite" or "in spite of"
It could be worse
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Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-11-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: Ballincollig - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: Ballincollig - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 08:00 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 09:34 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 10:14 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 11:40 AM
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