Ballincollig (rev. I)
#3
Thank you, Leanne. You are right about the adverbs. I ll look into those.
At youtube please don't miss: I wonder who and Bullfrog Blues ,-)

cheers
Serge

p.s.: I see that I must reformulate a bit in order to get rid of a couple of adverbs and will. ,-)
p.p.s: and of some of the somewhat forced wittiness too. ,-)


Messages In This Thread
Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-11-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: Ballincollig - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: Ballincollig - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 08:00 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 09:34 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 10:14 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: Ballincollig (rev. I) - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 11:40 AM



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