01-13-2013, 07:54 AM
what a heap of shite
my poetry is compared to yours
the extended hole metaphor is perfect to the naked eye. even, uneven, who cares/ it works
if you that bothered move limb by limb down,
is the last line a cliche; not that it matters
it does no harm to the poem and rounds it off nicely. it's good
to see a poem of this sort without the usual loveliness
my poetry is compared to yours
the extended hole metaphor is perfect to the naked eye. even, uneven, who cares/ it works
if you that bothered move limb by limb down,
is the last line a cliche; not that it matters
it does no harm to the poem and rounds it off nicely. it's goodto see a poem of this sort without the usual loveliness