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Love Poem No. 01
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01-13-2013, 05:53 AM
I don't do praise... but this is extraordinary! Writers of cliched emotional poems must take note -- no hackneyed phrase lives here, but I'm pretty sure I know exactly how this feels. The repetition is excellent but it's the second stanza that really gets me, especially the final three lines.
It could be worse
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Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 03:55 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 05:53 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:13 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 07:22 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 07:23 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 07:41 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by serge gurkski - 01-13-2013, 07:53 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by billy - 01-13-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 08:11 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by billy - 01-13-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: Love Poem No. 01 - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2013, 08:26 AM
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