01-12-2013, 11:35 PM
Sersshy - you have had a rampant hyphen extravaganza deluxe!
I love it- so bold, so subversive, so bolshy.
stanza 2 is missing some puntuation.
Stanza 3 is somewhat, my dimness notwithstanding, rambley.
else I like the silliness.
Stalky.
I love it- so bold, so subversive, so bolshy.
stanza 2 is missing some puntuation.
Stanza 3 is somewhat, my dimness notwithstanding, rambley.
else I like the silliness.
Stalky.