01-12-2013, 01:54 PM
I don't think you need a comma between "bed" and "a." That is one whole phrase, it needs no pause. You also don't need it in "her and I" for the same reason.
But I really like this poem. I've felt this most nights, and it's what keeps me awake.
But I really like this poem. I've felt this most nights, and it's what keeps me awake.
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind