First Poem: "Klink"
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the first one sounds like billiards, but i get the impression it's about luck or serendipity and chance, is it fate or skill. i like the gambling stock market thing, if that's what it is. i like it because it makes the reader think, i think the repeating line works well, which i presume are the sound of greed and good luck (winnings)

i never saw the ball thing in the last stanza
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First Poem: "Klink" - by Card - 01-12-2013, 06:19 AM
RE: First Poem: "Klink" - by abu nuwas - 01-12-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: First Poem: "Klink" - by billy - 01-12-2013, 09:41 AM
RE: First Poem: "Klink" - by Card - 01-12-2013, 01:50 PM



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