Hate

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I on the other hand, love grammar. 'Course, that's not to say I'll always get it right.

But... here, I just did some capitalization and commas and stuff. I just have trouble reading stuff when it doesn't have capitalization and punctuation. I know, I know, that's a big problem to have and I should learn to cope.
Until I do (if I do) I'll probably edit posts, but I probably won't post them, lest I become obnoxious. You don't mind me doing so here, do you?

Historically the common denominator in war is hate,
Sealed the fate for those not wanting to relate,
The lack of communication, two people two races,
So this war is what we've come to, one line million faces,
Religion preaches peace and love; but is a poster boy for war,
Where did you learn to hate? At the church pews: before
You were old enough to think alone your mind has been polluted
Priests, preachers, and popes are the generals that's recruited
You fight for Christ? For Buddha? I'm the anti-religion,
And I HATE the cloth; I laugh as I read and listen,
Paying attention to this guy as he tells and hurts,
Because I'll embrace my hate, and it is the church

Anyways, now that I've been a bit annoying, I'll do what I'm supposed to do here.

I like what you've written here. It's often true, unfortunately, and I think it flows pretty well. I'm not entirely sure what you mean about "one line million faces," is that a misspelling of something or a misplaced word?
Also, I think that maybe instead of "poster boy" you might want to say "poster child." I've never heard the phrase "poster boy" before.

Hope I helped, really sorry if I haven't! I've edited my father's poems before, but it's mainly for diction or out-of-place words.