01-11-2013, 09:18 PM
Arriedo and Rowens, I'm grateful for your reponses.
Don't be concerned about laughing A. t's meant to be amusing tho I hope there's a message in here too. The colon is there to enforce a stop after "revival day" and focus attention on the last statement which I originally wanted to place on one line, but used a line break for aesthetic reasons (which I now realise is not the best excuse.)
R. I'm not sure I'get' your comment about postmodern blues, but if you consider it redolent of an old fashioned blues poem, I have to some extent succeeded.
Thanks again both.
Don't be concerned about laughing A. t's meant to be amusing tho I hope there's a message in here too. The colon is there to enforce a stop after "revival day" and focus attention on the last statement which I originally wanted to place on one line, but used a line break for aesthetic reasons (which I now realise is not the best excuse.)
R. I'm not sure I'get' your comment about postmodern blues, but if you consider it redolent of an old fashioned blues poem, I have to some extent succeeded.
Thanks again both.