yeah i saw it, the problem is that some of these forms are so intricate. i'm getting that every 6th and 8th syl are part of the rhyme scheme as opposed to an alternating 6, 8 syl. which means the 8 syl line has two words at work in the rhyme scheme. no problem with the table, let me know if you need any help with it.
The grand untarnished sea6 -
How glorious for me6 and you8
To wander as we do6
Along its beach and through6 the tide!8
How can I harbor pride6
Now walking here beside6 the shore?8
Can you, my love, ignore6
The sigh, forevermore6 to dwell
Within our glassy shell?
The gleaming stars, which fell to earth -
What was their glory worth
Beside the gentle birth of life?
What need have we for strife?
The two of us, dear wife, are free!it's a bit like a waltz; quick quick slow
The grand untarnished sea6 -
How glorious for me6 and you8
To wander as we do6
Along its beach and through6 the tide!8
How can I harbor pride6
Now walking here beside6 the shore?8
Can you, my love, ignore6
The sigh, forevermore6 to dwell
Within our glassy shell?
The gleaming stars, which fell to earth -
What was their glory worth
Beside the gentle birth of life?
What need have we for strife?
The two of us, dear wife, are free!it's a bit like a waltz; quick quick slow