hi ash, it doesn't need a re write and my pov and others will seldom be the same
i thought it about the creator loving us but us failing too late to realize we're not capable of that kind of all giving love. as such i only saw the one voice...which could be more my problem than the poets.
and the poem did work for me which is always good.
i thought it about the creator loving us but us failing too late to realize we're not capable of that kind of all giving love. as such i only saw the one voice...which could be more my problem than the poets.
and the poem did work for me which is always good.
