01-11-2013, 09:38 AM
(01-11-2013, 09:19 AM)billy Wrote: a good way is to have a constant meter. and to use words that rhyme to perfection. ego/emo don't.Huh, that's pretty interesting. I don't know anything about poetry... So does this mean I should try to begin and end each line with one syllable words?
da/dum da/dum da/dum da/dum
da/dum da/dum da/dum da/dum
Was once a slave to my ego
Spent my time dressed up in emo
Now give me power, money, fame
All other things in life are lame

Thanks for the feedback!
PS: I never dressed Emo.

