Balance (explicit)
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(01-11-2013, 09:19 AM)billy Wrote:  a good way is to have a constant meter. and to use words that rhyme to perfection. ego/emo don't.
da/dum da/dum da/dum da/dum
da/dum da/dum da/dum da/dum

Was once a slave to my ego
Spent my time dressed up in emo

Now give me power, money, fame
All other things in life are lame
Huh, that's pretty interesting. I don't know anything about poetry... So does this mean I should try to begin and end each line with one syllable words? Huh

Thanks for the feedback!

PS: I never dressed Emo. Big Grin
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Messages In This Thread
Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 05:18 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by Arriedo - 01-11-2013, 08:25 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 09:00 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 10:17 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by Arriedo - 01-11-2013, 11:22 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 12:05 PM



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