Her gracefulness
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Quote:This is lovely...I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. I've just started writing poetry, so I'm not one to say, but I think I would prefer if you removed "that's her". Just my opinion, keep it there if you like it. Smile

Thank you very much, but I think you misunderstood the "that's her" part, I know what you've meant by your comment, and I definitely appreciate it. But, actually, "that's her" part presents the entire poem, it is emphasizes that everything around it is Her. Smile
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Her gracefulness - by Sonata - 01-11-2013, 08:18 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Fathima - 01-11-2013, 08:22 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Sonata - 01-11-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by billy - 01-11-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 09:02 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by arbil_poieo - 01-11-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Dcandy925 - 09-10-2017, 06:59 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by talktalk - 09-29-2017, 01:57 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by ClaireLou - 09-29-2017, 09:06 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Huckleberry - 10-02-2017, 07:01 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by OutofmycomfortZone - 01-14-2020, 05:20 AM
RE: Her gracefulness - by Knot - 01-17-2020, 10:10 PM
RE: Her gracefulness - by audrey - 01-18-2020, 06:36 AM



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