01-11-2013, 08:34 AM
Quote:This is lovely...I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this. I've just started writing poetry, so I'm not one to say, but I think I would prefer if you removed "that's her". Just my opinion, keep it there if you like it.
Thank you very much, but I think you misunderstood the "that's her" part, I know what you've meant by your comment, and I definitely appreciate it. But, actually, "that's her" part presents the entire poem, it is emphasizes that everything around it is Her.

