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Balance (explicit)
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01-11-2013, 08:25 AM
Your rhymes seem forced at times. You could check your syllable count to make the lines flow smoother. The content seems sad but not regretful like you're content with your life but lnow you have to change.
Isn't It Evil to Live Backwards~Loaded Lux I'm Batman, act up and I'll squeeze Hecklers/You'll die before the first clip drops, Heath Ledger!
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Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 05:18 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by Arriedo - 01-11-2013, 08:25 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 09:00 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 09:19 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by BennyBoy - 01-11-2013, 10:17 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by Arriedo - 01-11-2013, 11:22 AM
RE: Balance (explicit) - by billy - 01-11-2013, 12:05 PM
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