01-11-2013, 07:58 AM
this was a really heavy piece. The diction and vocabulary hold great weight in the poem's mood. good job! And I also agree with the nice way the rhymes flow. Love it!
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RE: Depression - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 12:32 AM
RE: Depression - by Arriedo - 01-11-2013, 01:57 AM
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