Depression
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I really enjoyed this, the way the rhyme rolls around made it a lot of fun to read (quite a heavy topic though).
The rhyme was quite rap-like, I can imagine it would perform well.

Cheers,
BTJ
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?

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Messages In This Thread
Depression - by Arriedo - 01-10-2013, 10:29 PM
RE: Depression - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 12:32 AM
RE: Depression - by Arriedo - 01-11-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: Depression - by benthejack - 01-11-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: Depression - by nothing_good16 - 01-11-2013, 07:58 AM



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