01-11-2013, 03:43 AM
I haven't really thought of a title for this. But I would like to know if this poem makes any sense. Another title I thought of is "Beginning Arrogance". I am unsure of this. Thank you for your feedback. 
No more is kindness
As though we're mindless
Of others delicate beating flesh
Concerned with selfish pleadings
Of ours to make our useless point
Not being mindful of a sweet kiss
And always forgetful
Of creation's beginning arrogance
Expelled from everlasting bliss
For holy disobedience
No more is kindness
As though we're mindless
Of others delicate beating flesh
Concerned with selfish pleadings
Of ours to make our useless point
Not being mindful of a sweet kiss
And always forgetful
Of creation's beginning arrogance
Expelled from everlasting bliss
For holy disobedience