Blues
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It's all right. We get the postmodern blues, these days. It sucks everything up with it. And makes everything out of style, in a perpetual forced stylishness.

Though without the familiar rhythms, this does have the ring of an old fashioned blues poem. It's up to you if it satisfies you. But I think it's fine as it is. It has enough to stand on its own.
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Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-10-2013, 11:00 PM
RE: Blues - by Arriedo - 01-10-2013, 11:31 PM
RE: Blues - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 12:12 AM
RE: Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-11-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Blues - by PoetryAndPhysics - 01-12-2013, 03:58 AM
RE: Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-23-2013, 01:52 AM
RE: Blues - by tectak - 01-23-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-23-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Blues - by svanhoeven - 01-23-2013, 07:23 AM
RE: Blues - by tectak - 01-23-2013, 08:48 AM



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