A Few Nights Back [Explicit]
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Hello koolguy, and thankyou for the read. I won't add too much to what has already been said, but I must say I also got female writer when I read this Smile
But in saying this I'm sure this is just a slight sexism, as in a male or female should act or speak in a set manner as a result of their gender, which is not cool Cool
As for the poem, I really enjoyed it. But it did feel a small bit long winded as a result of the lining.
Other than this good job Big Grin
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A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by koolguy1029 - 01-09-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by destiny1313 - 01-10-2013, 03:13 PM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by billy - 01-10-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-10-2013, 07:56 PM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by koolguy1029 - 01-11-2013, 02:49 PM



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