01-10-2013, 07:56 PM
Hello koolguy, and thankyou for the read. I won't add too much to what has already been said, but I must say I also got female writer when I read this 
But in saying this I'm sure this is just a slight sexism, as in a male or female should act or speak in a set manner as a result of their gender, which is not cool
As for the poem, I really enjoyed it. But it did feel a small bit long winded as a result of the lining.
Other than this good job

But in saying this I'm sure this is just a slight sexism, as in a male or female should act or speak in a set manner as a result of their gender, which is not cool

As for the poem, I really enjoyed it. But it did feel a small bit long winded as a result of the lining.
Other than this good job

