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A Few Nights Back [Explicit]
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01-10-2013, 03:13 PM
I realllly enjoyed this one! I am not a great critic but what works about it for me is that reading it was like hearing your thoughts as you are lying there. You may be right it may need trimming, but it did it for me because it seemed to match the way your mind works when you lay there in bed and these thoughts come .
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A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by koolguy1029 - 01-09-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by destiny1313 - 01-10-2013, 03:13 PM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by billy - 01-10-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-10-2013, 07:56 PM
RE: A Few Nights Back [Explicit] - by koolguy1029 - 01-11-2013, 02:49 PM
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