01-10-2013, 09:42 AM
Hey Billy, thank you for you reading and commenting. Yeah, I was afraid it would be a little confusing because I jumped from one thing to another without a clear meaning. Just let me know at what part it started getting confusing and I'll fix it.
Hey Newsclippings, thank you for stopping by and commenting. They were also my favorite lines, so I'm happy you liked them as well.
Hey Arriedo, thank you for reading and for your comment and it's the thought that counts right?
Hey Todd, oh, thanks! No you weren't reading it wrong, it wasn't suppose to be a double negative it was suppose to be "can" not "can't" and as far as the other "failure" or "failures" they were suppose to be plural. Good eye! Thank you for your comments and for reading it.
Hey Rowens, thanks for pointing that out to me. Yeah, the dashes are meant for pause, but maybe they're not necessary...? Thank you for reading and for your good eye.
Hey Newsclippings, thank you for stopping by and commenting. They were also my favorite lines, so I'm happy you liked them as well.
Hey Arriedo, thank you for reading and for your comment and it's the thought that counts right?
Hey Todd, oh, thanks! No you weren't reading it wrong, it wasn't suppose to be a double negative it was suppose to be "can" not "can't" and as far as the other "failure" or "failures" they were suppose to be plural. Good eye! Thank you for your comments and for reading it.
Hey Rowens, thanks for pointing that out to me. Yeah, the dashes are meant for pause, but maybe they're not necessary...? Thank you for reading and for your good eye.