01-10-2013, 12:28 AM
I wondered if you wanted your dashes to have the effect of hyphens, it just looks that way. It's hard to make the pause when they look like hyphens.
The "it's" in the second line is a typo.
The same typo twice in
"I created it's form
theatric at best
to then recognize and now present it's purpose"
I'll read it again later.
The "it's" in the second line is a typo.
The same typo twice in
"I created it's form
theatric at best
to then recognize and now present it's purpose"
I'll read it again later.