Dreamt in Dokki
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I like the title because you use "dreamt" and not "dreamed". Not everyone, including myself before I enlightened myself, will know that dokki is a harbor. I read it and think: docks of the bay. They do have docks in Misr too!
I may well be wrong in interpreting the spider complete with his web as a nicely scarily extended metaphor for memories scarcely too nice to be true.
The chuckling spider made me think of The Cure's not really seriously haunting song. But as the poetess that stalks me knows: size matters.

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Dreamt in Dokki - by Stalker - 01-06-2013, 10:35 AM
RE: Dreamt in Dokki - by serge gurkski - 01-09-2013, 12:29 AM
RE: Dreamt in Dokki - by Leanne - 01-12-2013, 04:22 PM
RE: Dreamt in Dokki - by billy - 01-12-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: Dreamt in Dokki - by cidermaid - 01-13-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Dreamt in Dokki - by Stalker - 01-13-2013, 01:17 AM
RE: Dreamt in Dokki - by heslopian - 02-10-2013, 11:07 PM



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