Tiny

[tectak]

This is the first poem I have ever written. I don't read much poetry. Nor do I know much about it. But I wrote this poem a couple of days ago, and then wrote a couple more. I would like to know if it is any good, if it even makes sense, if it conveyed the message I tried to portray, how I can improve it, etc. Thank you.

Tiny

Still a little angel,
She gazed at the night filled with sparkles.
'How tiny! ' she expressed.
They told her they were 'stars'
But she only understood their tininess.
A massive balloon of gas, they explained it!
She laughed and thought, 'What tiny people.'

In view of your own intro I suggest you repost in Novice.

Best,
tectak