The Mango Tree
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If this was mine - I think I would want to be the only one to make any alterations (if needed).

I would leave it a day or two come back to it, read it out loud, and if you hear or feel nothing out of step walk away and leave it be.

The imagery is wonderful.

One I really enjoyed.

Poppy ~xx~
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The Mango Tree - by ellz483 - 12-31-2012, 01:43 AM
RE: The Mango Tree - by rowens - 12-31-2012, 02:09 AM
RE: The Mango Tree - by Poppy - 01-08-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: The Mango Tree - by ellz483 - 01-08-2013, 12:39 PM
RE: The Mango Tree - by destiny1313 - 01-09-2013, 01:45 PM



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