my first post feedback please
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Desensitized

Trying to find myself in the rubble and ash
Singed souls Broken dreams
Remnants of the past

Never being good enough for typical reality
Departing from myself
Getting lost in technicality

Trying so hard
Always falling down
Fucked up dreams in a broken torn town

My trust given loyalty held
My head up high
Every time thrown their love was just a lie

Giving up in tears of frustration
Getting lost in my life
Knots of complication

Loosing sense of emotion believing only touching
Feeling only anger
"I love you" meaning nothing

Hearing it'll get better
Awaiting a fresh start
It's never coming and i'm being torn a part
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my first post feedback please - by destiny1313 - 01-07-2013, 10:51 AM
RE: my first post feedback please - by billy - 01-07-2013, 11:16 AM



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