01-07-2013, 05:10 AM
You know her. So I can't begin to make any suggestions about what she might like or be comfortable with. It's just one of those things where if she's worth the effort and the chance, you just have to dig the right words, get the feelings across, and see if you find each other on the page.
You say it's a dedication you're writing in a book you're giving her for her birthday. Maybe you could tie something of that into the poem.
You say it's a dedication you're writing in a book you're giving her for her birthday. Maybe you could tie something of that into the poem.