Please Help Me Improve This Birthday Poem
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Good advice! Thank you rowens.

I considered trying to make it more personal... But reading your advice I'll redouble my efforts in that direction.

Should I reference specific times we shared, aspects of her personality, her physical appearance... all of the above? Big Grin

I'll work on it for a few more days then edit my post with the new version. Smile
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RE: Please Help Me Improve This Birthday Poem - by rowens - 01-07-2013, 04:21 AM
RE: Please Help Me Improve This Birthday Poem - by BennyBoy - 01-07-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: Please Help Me Improve This Birthday Poem - by rowens - 01-07-2013, 05:10 AM



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