01-07-2013, 01:09 AM
Serrshhhh
perhaps what I could have / should have said about this is that it paints a very clear picture of a man who is tested and frustrated with this relationship, devoid of ideas at how to fix it and has become 'shutdown' in his ability to communicate any of that.
Somehow he wants to fix things but since the root is so elusive, incommuncable he is poised to accept the inevitability of another failed reconciliation, another failed attempt to re-ignite.
I find your sparse use of uncomplicated language conveys this idea very directly from you to me.
I offer these alternate phrases to show you small nuances, and how these are so full of impact in a bare bones representation of a complex situation.
If some of what I got was indeed your intention then I would say job well done.
StalkeR
perhaps what I could have / should have said about this is that it paints a very clear picture of a man who is tested and frustrated with this relationship, devoid of ideas at how to fix it and has become 'shutdown' in his ability to communicate any of that.
Somehow he wants to fix things but since the root is so elusive, incommuncable he is poised to accept the inevitability of another failed reconciliation, another failed attempt to re-ignite.
I find your sparse use of uncomplicated language conveys this idea very directly from you to me.
I offer these alternate phrases to show you small nuances, and how these are so full of impact in a bare bones representation of a complex situation.
If some of what I got was indeed your intention then I would say job well done.
StalkeR
(01-07-2013, 01:09 AM)Stalker Wrote: Serrshhhh
perhaps what I could have / should have said about this is that it paints a very clear picture of a man who is tested and frustrated with this relationship, devoid of ideas at how to fix it and has become 'shutdown' in his ability to communicate any of that.
Somehow he wants to fix things but since the root is so elusive, incommuncable he is poised to accept the inevitability of another failed reconciliation, another failed attempt to re-ignite. Perhaps also unwilling to take any responsibility for how that might go, save inviting it.
I find your sparse use of uncomplicated language conveys this idea very directly from you to me.
I offer these alternate phrases to show you small nuances, and how these are so full of impact in a bare bones representation of a complex situation.
If some of what I got was indeed your intention then I would say job well done.
StalkeR