01-06-2013, 10:14 PM
you're putting a good sense of humor in your comments, I couldn't stop laughing 
In fact I didn't want to force the rhyme, I wrote what I felt, I didn't want to respect the rhyme scheme either.
I know the meaning may be ambiguous at the end, but I don't want to "throw" stuff.
Though, the gerunds... are a problem... I will certainly do something with that.
In fact I didn't want to force the rhyme, I wrote what I felt, I didn't want to respect the rhyme scheme either.
I know the meaning may be ambiguous at the end, but I don't want to "throw" stuff.
Though, the gerunds... are a problem... I will certainly do something with that.