Blue Rose Garden

[tectak]

@tectak: What is this dangerous territory you speak of? Oh, and I've edited it again. Thanks for the input. Sadly this critique isn't as funny as the others. It's weird, how it's actually possible to critique your critique.

Hi brand,
Yep...its been said before. Crit the Crit seems fashionable at the moment! Don't give if you can't take and don't take if you won't give is the motto!
Horticulture IS dangerous territory because I know bugger all about it....except that roses don't have bulbs, of course.
Incidentally, I know that there is a place for humour in crit but that is not my raison d'etre on this site. Comedic errors in poetry are manifest...I make'em myself.....but it is worth remembering that it is not a guillotinable offence to make errors and a serious pedant would get short shrift here. Poetry IS serious but it is mostly for pleasure....and who can argue with that?
Best,
tectak