After the deluge
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This is a short and sweet love poem. It's eloquent, and not overly bombastic. The only gripe I have is with "rain after drought", which to me seems to scream desperation. I'll maybe go with something like "a timely rain".
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After the deluge - by Bizzy - 01-01-2013, 05:26 AM
RE: After the deluge - by arbil_poieo - 01-02-2013, 06:48 AM
RE: After the deluge - by brandontoh - 01-05-2013, 02:00 AM
RE: After the deluge - by Poppy - 01-06-2013, 09:28 PM



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