01-04-2013, 05:48 PM
Actually, rowens' interpretation is quite close to what I intend it to be. Anyways, I've edited the poem.
Tried to do some really radical changes, but it ended up sounding like a different poem, so I've decided to save that one for next time.
Tried to do some really radical changes, but it ended up sounding like a different poem, so I've decided to save that one for next time.
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